Revised Ending

As mentioned in an earlier post I was considering changes to my weak ending, I decided that the earlier ending of him being forgiven by the ghost didn’t seem believable, as far as ghost stories go. This lead me to my new ending which will be edited into my storyboard just after the character lays on the bed instead of the bathroom scene. The character will be overcome with guilt as we have seen him throughout the sequence. He is further haunted by the ghost, until eventually he is tormented and various signs give the audience the idea that the character wants to end his life. I haven’t figured out all the details but eventually the protagonist will eventually end up dying either suicide or accidental. The last 30 seconds consist of the protagonist walk out in front of a car, the screen goes black as they collide then we hear the sound of the driver ring the ambulance, the sirens the heartbeat, then a flat line, as if the story will restart with a new character.